New series - in search of beta readers!

[Yukarana]

I normally wouldn't get worried over stuff like this, but I've been working very hard on this series recently and want to know how worthwhile it's been, and what needs changing. It's quite long (6 pages a part roughly, and I'm writing the fifth part now - it's going to be at least six or seven parts in the end), so I don't really want to post it all in one for fear of putting people off (I know lots of text can do that). What I'm doing instead is asking for your help. If you want to read it/part of it, let me know and I'll send you the link. You don't have to comment on it but it would be much appreciated if you did. Thanks to anyone who helps me out!

P.S. Did anyone read the series Legend Seekers: Destiny Discovered in the times? This is the sequel to it.