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Comic for the times

Tue Dec 14, 2004 5:43 am

I decided to submit a comic for the neotimes. Crits?

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Tue Dec 14, 2004 6:31 am

XD That's great! I would combine them into one panel though, if you know what I mean. Just have the Bori actually facing the Bruce in the same panel, same landscape. But otherwise, that's great -- a lot better than some comics by first-time artists I've seen. :)

Tue Dec 14, 2004 7:02 am

I was a bit conflicted about the two different looking backgrounds after i finished. Actually it took you pointing it out for me to realize having 2 panels was totally unneccessary. I already submitted it though..(sigh)

Thanks for the crits :D
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