H&H pages 1-3 , a comic sort of thing..

[+Phantom-]

Page 1
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/14067503/
Page 2
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/14443348/
Page 3
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/14780483/

Well..uhh..yeah..this is that first page of a comic type thingy I'm starting to make. Yeah, I know it doesn't look that good,b ut it was my first attempt, and I've never done anything like this before..so...yeah..

Uh.. C&C I guess?

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[Pteri Sage]

Interesting so far... will the story have any more to it, or is this all you have for now?

[+Phantom-]

Interesting so far... will the story have any more to it, or is this all you have for now?

-nod-
Yup there's more, but for now it's all in my head sadly. I gotta draw more pages..

Edit* Page 2 is up..still sucks though..

[Pteri Sage]

Care to elaborate on the

City of Bevine

?

Interesting...

[+Phantom-]

Oh, uh, is that an actual city? Heh, I just made up a named. ^^;
Well, this is a story in comic form so the next page will explain a little more, and yeah the boy Josh hasn't left his home for three years..so..that's why he's all shocked. Heh, stupid..I know.. - __ -;;

[.:Requiem:.]

Interesting so far. I love his expression in the second-to-last scene in pt. 2.

[+Phantom-]

Interesting so far. I love his expression in the second-to-last scene in pt. 2.

Hehe, thank you. It's nice to see a few people seem to like my crappy plot line making ability. Heh. ^__^;;

Edit: Page 3 is up if anyone cares..I tried coloring it, this was my first time trying to color on teh computer so..yeah..it doesn't look good.