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Digital Art Piece

Fri Feb 18, 2005 2:45 pm

This is my second attempt at photo-manipulation... I redid the hair about 4 times, and i'm still not satisfied with it :\
But i'm learning :)

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/15285853/

Comments? Critique?

For anyone who wants to see what the original images looked like
http://img102.exs.cx/img102/56/sunsetstocks6ti.jpg

:)

Fri Feb 18, 2005 3:13 pm

Whoa! I love it! It looks very realistic and the girl blends in perfectly with the background. However, I don't like to say this, but the head looks a bit distorted and "out of it"...maybe it's the hair, like you said. :P Actually, how did you elongate the hair? I love the hair itself :)

Fri Feb 18, 2005 4:02 pm

Thanks, and now that I look, the head does look a bit odd...
As for the hair, um.. Basicly its brush strokes, blured a bit, and then a lighter, thinner stroke over it...
Although people manage to do it much better then I :P

Hmm, i'v got another question... I just saw the pic on the main computer in the house, which has a larger screen, and I noticed that there is this wierd lighter green strokes on the grass, but I don't see it on my laptop...
Does anyone else see it?

Fri Feb 18, 2005 11:26 pm

I like it :). One thing that sort of throws me off is the way the legs are. If I hadn't seen the original I wouldn't have been able to distinguish the legs too well. The piece of wood sort of throws it off and the grass blending through the legs looks a little awkward to me. I love all the rest though, it's like a painting.

Sat Feb 19, 2005 9:34 am

Charisma wrote:I like it :). One thing that sort of throws me off is the way the legs are. If I hadn't seen the original I wouldn't have been able to distinguish the legs too well. The piece of wood sort of throws it off and the grass blending through the legs looks a little awkward to me. I love all the rest though, it's like a painting.


Thanks :)

About the legs... The shoes did no go well at all the background, so I managed to get the shoes off, but even barefoot it looked like she was floating...
So I just made her ghost-ish.
It does look odd that her legs have a grassy texture... But hopefully next time i'll be able to blend picture together better :)
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