Unrequited Love

[Robin]

Alright, this is dedicated to the guy I love.......he dosen't go here, but this is also on my Xanga

You were the one I loved
But you didn't feel the same
I thought I had a problem,
I thought I was to blame.

When we met again
after a long, hard year apart,
I looked into your eyes
and it nearly broke my heart.

I know you do not love me
In the way that I love you
But if you ever need me
There's nothing I won't do.

A shoulder just to cry on,
or even just a friend,
I always be here for you,
I'll be with you 'till the end.

You may not believe I love you
But I do--more than you know.
It's a mark of how much love I have
That I let you go.

I'll always see you when I can,
I'll always be your friend.
And maybe one day, far from now,
I'll learn to love again.

[Twinkle]

Wow... I can really relate to that. Thank you.

[MyleneFarmer]

Beautifully written, and it's something that brings back many memories for me.

[Bangel]

Like I told you earlier, I applaud the rhyming. Nice job.

[.:Requiem:.]

Wow. That is gorgeous. Beautifully written, it all flows so smoothly, the rhymes are perfect, easy to read....brilliant. The subject matter, too, is amazing. You managed to take a fairly common topic in put it in such a way that it seems new and that the reader can really relate to it. You make it obvious that you understand the feelings in the poetry, which I think is very important for successful writing. All in all it's vey beautifully done, I applaud you.