=D Artdump! (Critique me!)
Sun Oct 02, 2005 1:44 am
Alright, I have four images. The first two have already been fixed and bettered, leading to the second two. These are the designs for my two male Neopets, Spencer the Krawk and Draconia the Shoyru.
http://www.deviantart.com/view/23412006/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/23448402/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/23556179/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/23482501/
Description may contain language unsuitable for younger users. Nothing horrible, just words mom might not want you to hear. You've been warned.
These actually have very deep stories behind them, I didn't just slap the designs together. And, as you can see, they're actually quite simple. Take away Drac's bands and seals and he's a boring old shadow Shoyru; let Spence's hair grow out along his back, and he's like 50% of the Krawk population.
Comb through my gallery if you'd like =) I want comments and watchers, I get so little attention on DA even though I'm doing everything I've been told to do to be watched. I want criticism and praise and stuff, durnit! It's a gallery of Neopets, anthropomorphic, and animal art, with some photo manips, human, fan and fantasy art shoved in.
http://www.deviantart.com/view/23412006/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/23448402/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/23556179/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/23482501/
Description may contain language unsuitable for younger users. Nothing horrible, just words mom might not want you to hear. You've been warned.
These actually have very deep stories behind them, I didn't just slap the designs together. And, as you can see, they're actually quite simple. Take away Drac's bands and seals and he's a boring old shadow Shoyru; let Spence's hair grow out along his back, and he's like 50% of the Krawk population.
Comb through my gallery if you'd like =) I want comments and watchers, I get so little attention on DA even though I'm doing everything I've been told to do to be watched. I want criticism and praise and stuff, durnit! It's a gallery of Neopets, anthropomorphic, and animal art, with some photo manips, human, fan and fantasy art shoved in.
Tue Oct 04, 2005 2:21 am
The Shoyru pictures are WAY to dark to be made out well. 
The Krawk pics are pretty good, just wish you closed of the trench coat instead of leaving it open...at least give him some pants to go with... 
The Krawk pics are pretty good, just wish you closed of the trench coat instead of leaving it open...at least give him some pants to go with...
Tue Oct 04, 2005 10:21 pm
He doesn't need pants! -Scoffs- Only sissy anthropets wear pants. And the Shoyru is meant to be dark, being a shadow. I guess my screen is just set lighter, since I can see the shading on the black o.X
Sat Oct 22, 2005 3:47 am
JustFishie wrote:He doesn't need pants! -Scoffs- Only sissy anthropets wear pants. And the Shoyru is meant to be dark, being a shadow. I guess my screen is just set lighter, since I can see the shading on the black o.X
The pants was only a suggestion that would stop making people do a double take (look twice to get it right).
And no, has nothing to do with my monitor and not seeing the Shoyru. It's way too dark.
