Lota pic

[amma_rose]

This is the older picture of Lota that I did.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v363/ladyblkwolf/my%20pics/scan0002.jpg

And this is my most recent work of her.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v363/ladyblkwolf/my%20pics/Lota.jpg

[.:Requiem:.]

Wow....that's a...thoroughly remarkable difference. Few things to point out, though.

1) Wings. This is a big one. They look very awkward and...fake, as is. This is a good tutorial.

2) Tail. Yah. Thicker at the base, I think, and a bigger...uh..twiddly at the tip. Then again, that's mostly a matter of personal opinion.

3) Basic anatomy. Yeah, silly little things like her arms are too thin, she's waay too skinny...etc., etc.

4) Hair. As is, it's just sort of...random yellow. It needs more lines, so it actually looks like hair. (something about her beak seems off to me too, but I can't think of any tips soI'll leave it alone.)

Last edited by .:Requiem:. on Wed Nov 16, 2005 12:00 am, edited 2 times in total.

[amma_rose]

Thanks I'll put those tips for my next Lota attempt.
I'll also keep those tips in mide when I do other drawing like Lota.