Homophone Poem

[.:Requiem:.]

Right...so, I was slightly inspired in gemetry the other day, butmostly I was just trying to avoid doing my homework, so I started writing on the back of it, and I misspelled the word 'here' in the first line of the poem I was writing. So, instead of acting like alogical sort of person and fixing/ignoring it, I figured 'Hey...I could use that!'. So, I wrote someweird little poem using a lot of homophones. It's kinda dumb, but I like it. Amazing what a typo can lead to. =P (well, I was writing...does that make it a write-o?)

I'm crying, hear
A river of my tears
Come rushing up around you-
My only answer is, know
This flood is all for you
This never-ending,
Ever-flowing see
That you can't live
With this guilt, and
We are not one, but too
Much for me to take,
Too much for me to bare
My heart to you, this
Wonderful high, swift becomes
A terrible, lo!
I'm crying
And you don't care.

Right. comments, criticism, flames, worship...whatever, it's all good.

[Forest_Majesty]

I like it!
It is original, and the homophones give it an unexpected twist.
Good job

[Uncle Xyzzy]

Someday, Canadians will find this and decide that your two powerful. They'll ban you're work, because kids will use it as a hyper-steriod. Serilousy.

Serilousy. It's a game I should introduce on the forums hear.

[webkitty]

OMG! I don't know what it is about that poem, but it excited me greatly. It's so unique and intresting, I liked the challenge of having to understand the words a certain way. It's kinda cool, since there are multiple meanings to each line. Oh, yes that is a truly brilliant poem.
Much praise.

[Tryske Rainbreeze]

Yay, you posted it! It made Science happy. For once. Anyway, wunnerfoolness. *heart*

[.:Requiem:.]

Yay, you posted it! It made Science happy. For once. Anyway, wunnerfoolness. *heart*

Loser, that was gym. The other one was in science. XD

Anyway, thank you all very much for the kind comments.