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 Post subject: My anime picture!!!
PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 10:54 pm 
PPT Toddler
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v483/Insane_skitty/animebyjessie.jpg
I done it on adobe illustrator....

Comments anyone but it isn't one of my best ones...

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The eyes are slightly confusing. Perhaps trying filling them in, or perhaps shading? Very good start though, it's very cute^__^


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Well, you did a pretty good job with the mouth (I always had a hard time drawing open mouths). The top of the head should be more round than flat (unless she has a flat head), and the whole head should be less long and more round. The eyes should be farther apart, and there should be ears. It is pretty cute, though. =)

If you'd like to see a tutorial that'll help you improve your anime-drawing skills, a good site is BakaNeko. I recommend it.


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Cute! ^^

Anywho, on to suggestions...

Perhaps try making the neck thicker? And I suppose it wouldnt hurt to move the eyes further apart. But thats just me. :P


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