Pink Poogle Toy Forum

I decided to submit a comic for the neotimes. Crits?

XD That's great! I would combine them into one panel though, if you know what I mean. Just have the Bori actually facing the Bruce in the same panel, same landscape. But otherwise, that's great -- a lot better than some comics by first-time artists I've seen.

I was a bit conflicted about the two different looking backgrounds after i finished. Actually it took you pointing it out for me to realize having 2 panels was totally unneccessary. I already submitted it though..(sigh)

Thanks for the crits