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The Color White by Court Dancer

White is the color of snow
The color of milk that flows
The color of a peaceful dove
The color of a cleaning rubber glove

The color that is on every wall
Since parents say it matches all
The color of an empty hall
The color of all

For me it's the color of nothingness
An emotionless color
To whom no one can express feelings
The color white

White is bleak and cold
The color of the old
The color of an empty cloud
The color of a snowy mound

White is the color that took Grandma
White is the color that took Grandpa
White is the color of all
White is the color that took them all.

Well, the beginning (the first two stanzas or so) seemed to have forced rhymes, while the rest barely rhymed at all. The rhythm was really off in places, and it was kind of repetetive, though that may have been dleiberate on your part. Really good ideas, some of them fit the color really well.