PPT Subtext King/Queen 3

[Kuri]

I was originally going to use something like "illuminating a mystery" only I can't remember exactly how I put it, but then when I looked back most people used mystery and it also sounded ALOT like others, so I changed it to the next best thing I could come up with.

[AutumnElf]

Watericesage -- Great job, very descriptive and just the right length.

o_0 -- I get what you're saying, but it just doesn't sound... right. Might be because you used "majesty" instead of "mystery" but then again maybe not.

.:Requiem:. -- Nice and fancy-sounding, and yes it goes with the signature but not everyone will know that, will they?

Sirclucky -- Very good, it fits with the image perfectly.

Qanda -- It's good, but kind of plain, I guess.

Loser1921 -- A perfect subtext, good job!

Kurisutaru -- It's o-kay, but I don't know... it just doesn't sound "right" for some reason.

Twizzler0171 -- I don't really get it...

Eliminate -- Twizzler0171 and Kurisutaru

((I'll give Trinity one more day.))

[Trinity]

I'm here at last!

Watericesage // Mysteriously Enticing
This is wonderful. It fits with how people are just enchanted by the mystery of Stonehenge, it uses uncommon words, and it's the perfect length! 10/10

o_0 // An Unsolved Majesty
I don't really think majesty should be used in that context... 6/10

.:Requiem:. // A Mystery Resplendant
It sounds very elegant, and will fit perfectly with the mood of the sig; though some people may not know what 'resplendant' means. 9/10

Sirclucky // Shedding light on a Mystery
Meh, it's okay... It's a bit long though. 7/10

Qanda // Mystery is Illuminated
It fits with all of the signature; I like it. 9/10

Loser1921 // A Mysterious Wonder
Another really good one that fits with the whole sig! 9/10

Kurisutaru // Illuminating A Puzzle
This is a pretty good one. I like how you didn't use 'mystery' like many others did, and just used puzzle instead. And it fits with the whole sig, like most of the others. 9/10

Twizzler0171 // Ever changing mystery
This doesn't fit too well, because Stonehenge doesn't really change... 6/10

Eliminate: Twizzler and o_0

[AutumnElf]

Twizzler0171, o_0, and Hellyer will not be able to participate this round.

Round 5


((Set by Atjj))

Subtexts must be in by Sunday, May 15th. Judging must be done by Tuesday, May 17th.

[loser]

Ohh... this is tough...

Changed! See next post!


No me gusta... Ill change it...

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[WIS]

The Guiding Light


[EDIT]
Nuuu! Why'd you have to post before me? ;_;

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[Kuri]

Lighting The Way


Hmm... I might think of a better one later...

[Qanda]

*fade in*The lone vigilante*fade out* *fade in*dispelling darkness*fade out*

[sirclucky]

ooh this is a hard one

Beacon of hope

Very much subject to change . I like the beacon part- but cant think of anythign that fits the subtext yet runs smoothly. Hopefully an idea will hit me in my sleep - or i'll have to hope my strong preformance from a few pervious rounds carrys me though this one

[WIS]

Changing mine to:

Follow Your Guiding Light

[EDIT] *changed it YET again*

[.:Requiem:.]

ooh this is a hard one

Beacon of hope

Very much subject to change . I like the beacon part- but cant think of anythign that fits the subtext yet runs smoothly. Hopefully an idea will hit me in my sleep - or i'll have to hope my strong preformance from a few pervious rounds carrys me though this one

You stole mine exactly. XD

A Lone Beacon

[loser]

Changed subtext to:

A luminous hope

Its better, but will probably change again!

[AutumnElf]

So... does anyone still want to change theirs? If yes, I'll give you a day to do so.

[.:Requiem:.]

I'm good with mine.

[sirclucky]

im good with mine