I got alot of helpful advice from people on the Neoboards, and alot has changed on my application.
http://www.neopets.com/~etebul
I need to know if my application is good enough to get the pet. If not, I will take it down, and neomail the owner to inform her that I took down the app.
The reason for this, is because someone on the neoboards said I was very unlikely to get the pet. I know I shouldn't take something like that to heart, but it really did hurt. I've put alot of time into making the application. And would greatly like some ratings.
If fellow ppters agree with the random neopian, I will take down my application as mentioned above.