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Universal Senja · **Posts:** 731 **Joined:** Tue Jun 01, 2004 3:26 pm

Like others, this genre really isn't my first choice in a music genre. However, I do hear music like this on the radio station I listen to and I can honestly say I like it better most of the songs of this genre that are played on the station. Wish I could give you some advice or comments specific to the genre, but like stated above, I don't listen to the genre much.

Regardless, thumbs up to the song. I really like it. :)

(If you have the time, could you tell me how [what kind of equipment, etc.] you used to create this? I was curious because I'm currently looking at buying a music program where you can record tracks. The program does have default tracks, but it's no fun if you make a song with the same tracks everyone else used. :) )

Alex · **Posted:** Wed Oct 13, 2004 3:23 pm

Universal Senja wrote:

Like others, this genre really isn't my first choice in a music genre. However, I do hear music like this on the radio station I listen to and I can honestly say I like it better most of the songs of this genre that are played on the station. Wish I could give you some advice or comments specific to the genre, but like stated above, I don't listen to the genre much.

Regardless, thumbs up to the song. I really like it.

(If you have the time, could you tell me how [what kind of equipment, etc.] you used to create this? I was curious because I'm currently looking at buying a music program where you can record tracks. The program does have default tracks, but it's no fun if you make a song with the same tracks everyone else used.

)

I'm not 100% sure, but I think he went to a recording studio to do it

Tailseh · **Posted:** Thu Oct 14, 2004 9:16 pm

SL! This sounds so good.. I mean, I didn't expect such a nice voice. *thumbs up*

Zero! · **Posted:** Thu Oct 14, 2004 11:42 pm

Heeeey, this song is really catchy! I don't normally listen to music like this, not my thang, but I like this song! I'm not sure why, maybe it's the music, maybe it's the singing, maybe it's just the fact it was done by you, but whatever it is, it makes it good! Is there anywhere I can go to find the lyrics for it so I can sing to it? :3

xjox · **Posted:** Tue Oct 19, 2004 10:50 pm

I love it! Really good song, did you write it yourself? ill be looking out for it in the record store!:)

Brian · **Posts:** 146 **Joined:** Mon May 31, 2004 4:08 am

Dude, did you do all the parts?

_jaye_ · **Posted:** Fri Oct 22, 2004 6:53 am

What can I say? I'm hooked.

Like "This Love" by Marron 5, at first I thought it was a tad strange and not my type; but then after listening to it a few times more, I'm hooked to it!

Well done ^^ I didn't know you had such a nice voice. It sounds so pro and well mixed. Good job. I'm waiting for your album ;]

fallen_enigma · **Posts:** 693 **Joined:** Sun Jun 13, 2004 6:37 am

Well, I've listened to it alot since you told me in IM about it, SL. I even got my nephew to listen to it and he said he liked it. I thought was kinda odd because he usually only listens to Eminem, and is completely different from what Eminem would sing lol. But we both really like it and we were both wondering when you're gonna come out with more songs

Tailseh · **Posted:** Sat Nov 06, 2004 2:12 am

Are you going to be releasing anymore hits?

Shoyru_Lover · **Posted:** Fri Nov 12, 2004 3:41 am

Zero wrote:

Heeeey, this song is really catchy! I don't normally listen to music like this, not my thang, but I like this song! I'm not sure why, maybe it's the music, maybe it's the singing, maybe it's just the fact it was done by you, but whatever it is, it makes it good! Is there anywhere I can go to find the lyrics for it so I can sing to it? :3

Did you say thang?

Thanks everyone for checking it out ^_^ I'll definitely post the lyrics up here for anyone who wants it. I'm currently recording 2 more songs at the moment and plan to go nuts over the summer break. I'll let you guys all know when they're available

fallen_enigma · **Posts:** 693 **Joined:** Sun Jun 13, 2004 6:37 am

*pounces on SL* Yay!! Lyrics.....and YAY! More songs!!!

Shoyru_Lover · **Posted:** Sat Nov 13, 2004 2:32 pm

MY ADDICTION LYRICS

Wanna tell you how you make me feel
Not gonna lie wanna tell you for real
The way you walk brings me to heel
The way you talk, your ______ appeal
You're the witch in this masquerade
My mind is caged feeling half betrayed
We can't be but I'm under your spell
You're my drug babe feeling heaven on hell
Baby I won't lie
You are on my mind
Not the one but I'm
Powerless to fight

(Like a drug girl)
I know it's so bad for me but I, keep coming back for this
(My addiction)
Gotta have a hit right now but I know you're killing me
(Like a drug girl)
I know it's so bad for me but I, keep coming down with this
(My affliction)
Want you so bad right now but I know it's killing me

Wanna tell you how you make me act
All the little things your love seems to lack
The power you hold distorts my sight
My heart tells my head I've lost the fight
This addiction, affliction seems to be causing me friction
Can't get you out of my mind, losing direction
Fantasy, friction, looks like I've lost the distinction
Sickness is killing me, cos girl you're so wicked
Baby I won't lie
You are on my mind
Not the one but I'm
Powerless to fight

(Like a drug girl)
I know it's so bad for me but I, keep coming back for this
(My addiction)
Gotta have a hit right now but I know you're killing me
(Like a drug girl)
I know it's so bad for me but I, keep coming down with this
(My affliction)
Want you so bad right now but I know it's killing me

Girl I know that it seems I've lost my mind
But I'm still struggling so hard to find
Girl I know that it seems I've lost my way
But I can't keep it up with the games you play

(Like a drug girl)
I know it's so bad for me but I, keep coming back for this
(My addiction)
Gotta have a hit right now but I know you're killing me
(Like a drug girl)
I know it's so bad for me but I, keep coming down with this
(My affliction)
Want you so bad right now but I know it's killing me

Ammer · **Posted:** Sun Nov 14, 2004 9:20 pm

Wow. Very good recording/voice SL.

I'm going to give you my honest opinion as I listen to this genre a lot.

Your voice is very nice to begin with, not too high and not too low. It's nice. As robot said, the lyrics could be a little more sophisticated and as Yoshi said, you should've added more strength to the part such as "Ohhh".

The first line in the chorus bothered me. It sounded good but it seemed to trail off at the part after "but I,". The music was nice, I liked the flow of it. One part however bothered me,

Quote:

Girl I know that it seems I've lost my mind
But I'm still struggling so hard to find
Girl I know that it seems I've lost my way
But I can't keep it up with the games you play

It was too high. A little too high for my liking there.

Other than that, I loved the song. I hope I don't sound like a jerk but you wanted an honest review and I gave you one. I honestly love this song and I cannot wait for a followup. Perhaps you can add in a piano in the next song or some police sirens like fading out.

Great job!

Zero! · **Posted:** Mon Nov 15, 2004 12:07 am

Shoyru_Lover wrote:

Did you say thang?

Yup, I say thang 'cuz it be like mah style, yo.

*sees lyrics* WHEE! *saves them* :3

Shoyru_Lover · **Posted:** Sat Mar 05, 2005 1:04 am

Hey guys ^_^ Check out my new song MOTHERLAND

It can be downloaded from http://www.download.com/kym

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