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hey! since I was bored, I made two more faerie pictures...



and the second one:

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I'm thinking about sending one in for the faerie festival art gallery special

nice work on those two.


FIRST ONE
i'm not too keen on how you do the eyes, i htink they should be a little more defined.

the rest of the piece is great. i love the way you did the wings, especially.

SECOND ONE
this one is nice too, the eyes are better defined, and i like the colors, wings are good.

two very well done pieces. bravo

Great job! I think you should enter the first one here into the gallery.

Your art is very beautiful.

Edit: *Whacks computer* Don't only post my first line of text, browser. -_-

Anyway.

First: Nice. She seems a bit lifeless, though, like a mannequin. Also, the arms are in an awkward position, particularly the right (the viewer's right) one. However, the wings are very well done- I like the detail you put in them.

Second: Again, rather lifeless, as if she were put into that pose, instead of having put her arms behind her head, etc., on her own accord. Her pose, like the first faerie's arms, is a very awkward position. Her legs are turned to one side, whereas her body is facing the opposite way. The wings are oddly drawn- it looks like you tried to make it seem as if the right (again, our right) wing is closer to the viewer, at a side view. However, you didn't really do the side view, so the wings are at different angles. Her arm lengths are also different, though in a different way from the wings- while the arm that's closer to us in appearance is shorter/smaller, the one that's farther away is longer and larger.

I do really like the second/earth faerie's dress, however. Beautifully done- the texture and lighting is very close to what they would be on a real dress. Also, the background is well done- looks a great deal like real clouds. Very realistic looking.



And my vote goes for faerie one. I suggest you enter that one. I'm still transfixed by those awesome wings. ^_^

wow i love the wings on both of them especially the first one (bluish pink) i suggest you enter her in (the legs are really well drawn) but neopets might not like it because the top of her dress is a bit too see-through

Wow, I love the wings!

Like a couple of others have said, the pose doesn't seem all that natural, so you might want to keep that in mind if you draw another faerie, for example.

I'd say go with the first one to enter though

when I first read that, I though what the hell.. but then I realized you're right, I really looks like one can see the breasts through her dress. well, I definitely didn't do that on purpose

thanks for all comments, I really appreciate them

anyway, I found a half-finished airfaerie pic I started ages ago on my PC, and after working on the pic a bit, I prefer it over the two above, probably because I like air faeries best, so I'm going to submit this picture:

airfaerie

although I doubt I'll get into the gallery (TNT hasn't accepted anything I sent them for the past 2 years).
when I submit the picture, do I have to remove the 'watermark' in the lower right corner?

Oooh. I like this one a lot. For some reason, her eyes have this sort of mischevious look, and her pose is far more relaxed and natural than the others.

My only real gripe is that she looks rather flat, but it's barely noticable, so eh.

And leave the watermark on. If someone steals the pic, then you'll have proof that it's yours. If they chop off the watermark, or paint over it, then you'll have the original artwork to compare with the stolen piece. ^_^

Wow!!!!! Beautiful. The Air Faerie is the best for sure.

I love them all. As Alex said, the wings are great. However, the eyes on the first and secound bother me.

However, great drawings. I love their outfits. You didn't make them to modest or to skimpy(*Cough*Neopets faeries*Cough*).

The eyes are a little blurry on the first one, and it's hard to see the edges on her hair, but they are both great! You should definately send them in to the faerie art special, you obviously worked hard on those pictures, and it shows!

Those are really lovely. I like the soft colors. They seem a little more um..shapely up top..than neopet's faeries, if that is the look you wanted. I'm not sure they'd be added to the art gallery or not, because of that. But for just a picture of a faerie, they are very nice.

They have such a nice, pastel like look. I love them, good job!

I personally think the air faerie is the best. Good luck on getting it in! Let us know if they accept it or not!

I agreee, Air faerie is probably the best Or you could edit one of the others, so that it is not too see through.

You coudl consider making your own online gallery, it is not difficult:)