Pink Poogle Toy Forum

I'm guessing its to late yto join? Darn. I miss everytime...

Ok... Where was I? Ah, yes...

Livin_in_the_shadow, "Discover the music"
Hmm, I'm not really too keen on it actually. It's borderline- not bad, but not outstanding either.

Sirclucky, "A different kind of ABC's"
As a general subtext, I like it. Its original and clever... but unfortunatly it doesn't really go with the signature.

Anubis, "Turn the page; I'll play you my heart's tune"
Nice. I like this one quite a lot - the only problem is its not a really 'love-y' signature... but its a very nice subtext! And fits in with the tune etc, and the turning page.. well done!

Twizzler0171, "A tune unveiled"
Yes, I see where you're going with this... but I'm not that keen on the way you worded it. 'Unveiled' doesn't seem to fit.

Syrill, "A Trill that Thrills"
Nice! The alliteration sounds good and its musically connected.. so I like it!

Qanda, "Unfinished Symphony"
Well, first of all- its hardly a symphony is it? And it doesn't give the impression that its unfinished... not as if the notes faded away or anything. But I've read your explanation so I can see what you mean, sort of! But still - people glancing at it wouldn't see what you meant, would they?
Its borderline.

o_0, "Note by note *fade out* *fade in* In perfect harmony *fade out*"
I quite like this!! The fading is good and just the general feeling fits the signature. As with Dawns subtext though, the 'harmony' bit isn't quite right as its only a few notes.... but I don't see what else you could have used instead. Well done!

VeraX, "And the notes continue to unfurl..."
The notes don't seem to be 'unfurling' exactly.. but like this one all the same! It includes both aspects of the signature.. thought it does sound a little weird. You could have gone withought the ... at the end.

Hellyer, "Beauty in Simplicity"
This strikes me as a sort of flowery subtext! Don't know why... probably because of the 'beauty' in it!!... Anyway, I think this is an ok subtext. Not brilliant - but it would fit in the signature... its just doesn't really... stand out enough.

Loser1921, "Another Note *fade out* *fade in* Another Page *fade out* *fade in* Another Song *repeat*"
This is my favourite! I really like it, especially with the repetition - which makes it interesting - and also the fades are very well done. It also ties up with the page turn. Good job!

Note: Overall, this round was good - but a lot of the entries were in the wrong 'mood' for the signature. This was quite a challenge for the first round, so everyone who actually entered, did well!

I choose to eliminate... the_dog_god and Qanda.

The_dog_god, .:Chronically Depressed:., ((Tied with Duckey, then singled out by my trusty random number generator)) Chipper, Hella nervous, and Jabond102 cannot participate this round.

Round 2


((Set by Robert2100))

Subtexts must be in by Tuesday, April 12. Judging must be done by Thursday, April 14.

Purple guns *fade out, then in* and pink bows *fade out, then in* are the latest fashion... *fade out, and then in* ... you'd be wise to agree!

Still thinking. Subject to change. XD

I don't think randomly generating who is kicked out between CD and Duckey is very fair... I always thought you should kick out none or both.

But never mind...

Who ever said babies shouldn't play... *fade out**fade in* with guns?*fade out**repeat*

Yay. Subject to change.

Not just a little threat

Not too sure about this one, I might change it.

I missed the first round, darn it.
I wish I could be in this round, I really have a good one.

Evil takes a baby form

Hmm...I think I'll keep that one.

Aw... oh well... thanks...
I'll still be rooting for people!... namly Anubis!

Abies? Psst, I wasn't here. *Zoom*

When everything is said and done *fade* fear the baby with the gun

edit: btw dawn... your subtext is great

Told you, Dawn!