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Alright, this is dedicated to the guy I love.......he dosen't go here, but this is also on my Xanga

You were the one I loved
But you didn't feel the same
I thought I had a problem,
I thought I was to blame.

When we met again
after a long, hard year apart,
I looked into your eyes
and it nearly broke my heart.

I know you do not love me
In the way that I love you
But if you ever need me
There's nothing I won't do.

A shoulder just to cry on,
or even just a friend,
I always be here for you,
I'll be with you 'till the end.

You may not believe I love you
But I do--more than you know.
It's a mark of how much love I have
That I let you go.

I'll always see you when I can,
I'll always be your friend.
And maybe one day, far from now,
I'll learn to love again.

Wow... I can really relate to that. Thank you.

Beautifully written, and it's something that brings back many memories for me.

Like I told you earlier, I applaud the rhyming. Nice job.

Wow. That is gorgeous. Beautifully written, it all flows so smoothly, the rhymes are perfect, easy to read....brilliant. The subject matter, too, is amazing. You managed to take a fairly common topic in put it in such a way that it seems new and that the reader can really relate to it. You make it obvious that you understand the feelings in the poetry, which I think is very important for successful writing. All in all it's vey beautifully done, I applaud you.