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This friday coming, the 18th I believe.

Oh phew, I thought it was last Friday, and I was all *eehhh!*

NOTE of Disclamier: This is based upon a true story except for the ending of the story, names, other parts, and pretty much the whole thing except for a paragraph or two.

School Bus - About 1,010 words!
By,
Jabond102

Donald is just a kid who likes girls but hides it and they don’t know he likes them, but he is overall one of the normal and not geeks or smokers in the school. He has a secret crush on a girl named, ‘Kate’. On Valentines Day he hopped onto the bus.
“Hey!” Donald said as he got on to the bus. Thankful that Ms. Sunn (name changed for security reasons) came back from being sick, Ms. Sunn had been sick with ammonia and he was stuck with a substitute for two weeks!
The substitute got five people on the bus dentition. One of the people she gave dentition to she called a bus clown since he shot his water bottle into the aisle. The second kid was doing his homework the bus and she said you are not allowed to even though he always did it. The third kid was talking to loud. The fourth kid stole a kid’s backpack and got in trouble for doing it. The last kid that she yelled at was a kid in second grade since he was wearing no seatbelt. Since the evil substitute did not know anybody’s name all she said was, “Hand this slip to the principal.” As Donald watched the kids get off each time they ripped the slip up and ran back to their houses and they never got in trouble.
Donald had always had a secret crush on the girl who sat in seat 22, her name was Kate. Kate was a beautiful blonde, skinny, and was kind all of the time. Kate always though Donald liked a different girl but what she didn’t know was that he liked her. Donald thought the girl that Kate thought he liked was, ‘dumb, annoying, and not good looking.’
On Valentines Day in the back of the bus where they all sat, with other people around them, things happened. Katie kept saying, “Donald you know you like her, give her a heart.” Donald ignored the girl he liked with all of his heart and kept talking to Tony, the kid in front of him. Tony was cursing at Donald because Donald was making fun of him for liking someone.
“Tony I know you like Emily!” shouted Donald. “No I do not you –words I cannot write on ppt-,” responded Tony. Donald yelled to Emily who sat in the front, “Tony loves you!” Emily got mad and did not talk to Tony for the rest of the bus ride.
At the end of the bus ride Kate told Donald that she was going out with someone named Sean. Donald got mad. Sean was a jerk, bully, and probably did drugs. He then found out that Sean and Kate had made out and Donald would not state his anger. “Sean is a jerk and he is stupid. Wouldn’t be surprised if he did drugs!” Donald said. Kate got mad and wouldn’t talk to him for the rest of the ride. Donald thought in his head, Thank GOD! She won’t bother me anymore!
Kate then got off and Donald looked at Tony. “Tony make fun of me but, I like Kate!” said Donald. The girl who Kate said Donald liked was shocked.
“You like Kate! I am telling her! I will, I will, I will!” stammered Tony. “I am telling you this friend to friend. I have not told her because I know she does not like me,” said Donald. “Donald, I have liked people before and told them. You do not know if she does or not. She could have bothered you earlier because she does like you.” “Maybe she does Tony, but if I ask the slightest ear could hear and the whole entire school would find out. Like when you liked Emily the whole school found out!” Donald started laughing but Tony looked mad. Emily then spoke up, “Tony, I am sorry I do not like you. One day I may but not now.” Tony smiled with joy knowing Emily probably did like him but would never tell him. “Okay Emily,” Tony said. He moved back into his seat smiling and was in a good mood for the rest of the bus ride.
“I see I get a break now!” Donald said while laughing. “At least now you won’t get mad at me since you admitted you like her. I just wish I Kate knew I liked her and she liked me. I long for the day I get a girlfriend,” said Donald.
“Donald, I promise not to tell her that you like her or anybody else. If you want to have a relationship though with her, I suggest on telling her you like her soon,” said Tony. “Well, I messed you up with your old girlfriend before Tony, if you Emily becomes yours I will not mess it up,” said Donald.
Donald had to get off the bus since the bus arrived at his house. Ms. Sunn gave him some candy for Valentines Day like she does on every holiday to everyone and Donald and his sisters got off the bus.
Donald got off the bus and started to wonder how relationships go, how things go. The next day he hopped onto the bus after he got ready for school. “Hey Emily,” he yelled to Tony making fun of him. He then got back into his seat all mad at Donald.
Kate then started to poke the same joke at Donald again. Donald then gained courage from what Tony had told him yesterday, “Kate I don’t like her. I like you,” she gasped and did not speak to Donald for the rest of the bus ride. The bus arrived at the school and Donald stuck his hand out and touched Kate’s butt. She laughed and smiled. “I guess some things take time, I hope you don’t next time you mention something like this,” said Kate. Donald smiled but knew Kate was lying.

NOTE: This is based upon a true story except for the ending of the story, names, other parts, and pretty much the whole thing except for a paragraph or two.

My dearest xjox, the fluffy bunnies will be the center of my story. But humans will play a big role, and will be seen for most of the time. is this ok?

Augh. I completely forgot about this. @_@ Well, I'm home sick (and there's a good chance I will be for the rest of the week) so it shouldn't be a problem to write it.

Im sure that will be fine! But to be on the safe side you probably should make the bunnies extra fluffy!!:P

Hmm, I've decided to set mine in Neopia, but keep the main character a human. And it's also based on a true story!

Oh crap, I think I revealed the whole story.

Star-Crossed Lovers - 1288 words.

Valentine's day was the one day that Jo hated. as she stormed into school, the pink remains of the card she had torn up hanging out the back pocket of the bag, where her little brother, Logan, had put it. With the door of the classroom nearly being thrown of its hinges, she slumped in her desk, where a rather amused Mr. Bryant was looking at her. "Is there anything you want to share with us?" he asked the angry girl, who gave him a sulking expression, which he had taken to mean 'No.' "So this card," he said, picking up the litter that had fallen out of the bag, "That exclaims a Master Templeton's affection for you is just a figment of the class's imagination?" Exchanging the rather vacant expression on her face to one of anger and embarrassment, she scoured the class for the little dweeb who had sent her the card that the teacher had read out. He was short, and he had large glasses. On the top of his head, was curly, greasy ginger hair, which one could see little flakes of dandruff inhabiting had one looked hard enough. Jo, on the other hand, was beautiful. She wasn't arrogant, but she knew she was beautiful. If someone said that she had beauty, then she wouldn't deny it, for she clearly was pretty, but she just absorbed it. Her waist-length hair was a shimmering brown colour, and went well with the hazelnut eyes that she flaunted on the other side of her face. She had a few freckles, dotting daintily around her nose, but nothing too astounding. In short, she was beautiful. As the glass were pointing, mocking her new-found love, her eyes flamed up, and you could see the red tinges around her hazel eyes, which one could only see when she was glaring. To seek comfort, she turned to her boyfriend, Matt, to gain insight on what to do. She was horrified to see Matt struggling to stifle his laughter, and nearly exploded with the mirth he had to conceal. With that, Jo lost her cool, and the angry mistress stormed out the room to the corridor, with tears welling up inside her dainty eyes. Mr. Bryant surveyed the card, and seeing Matt giving him a questioning look, he nodding, signaling for him to go and comfort his, probably former, girlfriend.

The door gently closed behind Matt, and he stretched his legs, in order to take a seat next to Jo. When he looked at her, she saw the tears flowing down her cheek, and the stains under her eyes made her look a mess. Matt shoved his hands in his pockets, but finding no evidence of a handkerchief, he ripped a bit of his T-Shirt to give to the girl sat next to her. Jo readily accepted it, and started wiping her eyes, bringing herself back to reality. Jo looked at the handsome young man sat next to her. He black hair was spiky above the top of his head, it made him look like a hedgehog, she had always said. His eyes were very pale, possessing a ghostly air to them, yet his lips were blood red. He had a few spots, but nothing more than what was to be expected one to have when going through the age that the class were at now. Jo didn't want to leave him, but how could someone who insulted her, who bullied her, really love her. She lowered her head, and resigned herself to thought. She really loved Matt, she knew that, and he was beautiful. He was funny, and when they were on dates, she couldn't help but look into his eyes and look at their future together, married with two, or even three children. Was it right to spoil that because of the stupid prank that her idiot younger brother pulled? But then, how insensitive was the boyfriend that sat next to her? If she were fired, would Matt laugh at her then, or would he mock her if she died. She imagined Matt standing up to the altar at her funeral, spouting out insults and jokes with her coffin stood behind him, losing all the respect she had because of her tragedy. She had a hard decision, and she looked up at the smiling boy, and realized she would miss a lot if she ever broke up with him.

Jo opened her mouth, but nothing game out but a small cough. Matt bent over the French book that she had brought out with her in her rage, and put his dark lips onto hers, and then, for what seemed like an eternity, they held their mouths, and they were in bliss. Jo had never felt such ecstasy before. Sure Matt had pecked her on the cheeks before, but this was the first time that he had... Well, that they had ever properly kissed before. The coldness of the lips that touched hers added to the warm feeling inside of her, as she glowed, readily, and as the lips let go of hers, she felt bare again, and empty as she had before she met Matt. She looked down again, and smiled. How could she abandon her true love after something like this? The bond between the two of them there, sat against the door to the French room had never been stronger, and she could tell Matt had shared the experience. In his eyes, there was a slight glimmer, and his lips had curved round into a smile. This was what true love was, Jo realized, and then she wanted nothing more than to cuddle Matt in her arms, and kiss all day. She opened her mouth, and with much greater confidence, she spoke to Matt, "I feel..." she said, before her voice crackled and faded out. "Don't speak," Matt said in his gently, melodic voice, putting a single, cold finger over her warm lips. Jo nodded, and stood up, grabbing the creased French book that the couple had forgotten about during their love. Hand in hand, they entered the door to face the class that had rejected Jo just minutes earlier.

The door flew open and a class swung their heads, to see the hands of the two lovers, bound behind their backs, much to the mirth of the class. Templeton blushed, as he saw the two glance at him, but luckily they took a seat on the other side of the classroom, and turned their backs to the geek who had been the target of such anger earlier. The lesson passed without anything else happening, thankfully, thought Jo. Templeton, who normally spent the lesson with his hand raised and his body jerking in anticipation of the next question, was much more quiet than normal. At the end of the lesson, just as they had entered, Matt and Jo exited hand in hand, much to the disappointment of the hoping boy, hopping out after them, trying to either look up the short skirt that Jo was wearing, try to propose or just apologies. Templeton pulled at the ripped remains of the seam that Matt had on, and as he turned round the look on his face grew domineering. Looking down on the small nerd that stood, looking up, he questioned in an elevated tone "Yes?" Matt struggled not to laugh, just as he had earlier, when the young kid's lip started quivering and tears welled up. He turned round, and ran. "I wonder what his problem is?" Matt joked as the two lovers, hand in hand, walked round the bend, with their lips sealed together. Valentine's Day is the one day that I love, thought Jo.

These are allowed to also be anti-valentines (moreso non-Valentines than anti) right, as long as they actually focus on Valentines itself?

Absolutely!:P

Sorry xjox... but i think im gonna have to withdraw, I've had a full week, and still have alot of writing and stuff I have to do before the week is over for school, and thus dont think im gonna have time to write a story for this Its a good idea though, I hope the rest of you have fun

Aww Ok, school work is much more important. Hopefully you will be able to join the next one if I do one!

This may sound stupid but I'm uncertain when midnight Friday is. Do you mean 12 AM on Friday (which means post on Thursday before the clock strikes midnight), or 11:59 PM Friday (before it turns midnight and then Saturday approaches)?

I'd really love to post, but if it's the former, I'll have to withdraw because I've had a busy week at school and still have work to do today (Thursday). It's also difficult to negotiate with the time difference and I thought from at first that it meant you could post on Friday as long as it was before Saturday.

Sorry I probably wasn't very clear..

Yes you thought right, you can post at any time on Friday, the dead line is 11:59pm Friday. Reviewing will begin on Saturday. (GMT is NST +8 I think)

When all of the entries are in can someone post them on a veryyyyy long post all together so jusges -moi- don't have to go looking around to find all of them.