PinkPT Subtext King/Queen 6---Final Round

[Susannahmio]

Robert - Fuzzy Outside - Sweet Inside

Hehe It may change

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[Twizzler0171]

Simply Nutritious

Thanks for all the replies last round. ^-^ I found them very encouraging.

[Pixa]

The nourishing nectars of a new bloom

Pizazz!

[Anubis]

Just a note to say that I changed my subtext, Robert.

[Robert]

YesItIsh and paperfacesX022 did not submit subtexts, so they are eliminated. Juges, please rate and review these, though once again their are no eliminations. Ratings due by Tuesday April 25

.:Requiem:.
A Delectable Display

Anubis
Fine Flavoursome Fruits

Blk Mage
Feeling Fruity

Dragonfire
Cherries and Kiwis and Strawberries, Oh My!

moogie
Juicy

paperfacesX022

pipsqueeek
Kiwi Contentment

Pixa
The nourishing nectars of a new bloom

susannahmio
Robert - Fuzzy Outside - Sweet Inside

Twizzler0171
Simply Nutritious

WIS
The Envy of Fruits

YesItIsh

[WIS]

Just to clear up incase a judge misunderstands.

The "envy" part refers to the kiwis. As they are in the middle, and on top of all the fruits. And they're green... get it?

[Robert]

Judges Notes: Good round! One thing you all have to remember is to give your subtext the same mood as the signature. If you have a dark signature, you want to create a dark subtext. If you have a happy signature, you don’t want to put a depressing subtext on it. Just keep that in mind when creating subtexts.


.:Requiem:.
A Delectable Display
Nice, I like the alliteration and the reference to the presentation of the fruit more so than the fruit itself. Nice work.

Anubis
Fine Flavoursome Fruits
Alliteration! It works, and I think it has the right feel for the signature as well. I think a better word could have been used for fruit, but since you used it as part of alliteration, it is ok.

Blk Mage
Feeling Fruity
I see you went for the alliteration, which works well on this signature, and I think the subtext also works well on this happy, bright signature. Now, the subtext isn’t anything super original or super special, but it works well here.

Dragonfire
Cherries and Kiwis and Strawberries, Oh My!
On most other signatures, I don’t think this would work that well, but since the signature has such a playful feel; your subtext matches it perfectly. Nice.

moogie
Juicy
I rarely think one word subtexts work, and I’m afraid this isn’t an exception. I don’t think one word can convey enough. There is a lot you could have done with the word juicy, so I think adding something would have helped.

pipsqueeek
Kiwi Contentment
I like how you focused on the kiwis, which are the main focus of the signature. And the way ‘contentment’ sounds next to ‘kiwi’ is very nice. Also, ‘contentment’ is a great word for this signature since it has such a light feel.

Pixa
The nourishing nectars of a new bloom
I see you tried to go a little poetic, but I don’t think it works that well on this signature. The subtext itself is nice, but it doesn’t have the same happy, light feel that the signature does.

susannahmio
Robert - Fuzzy Outside - Sweet Inside
I love it when people relate the image to the person’s name. The way you related it, is different, though funny, and I think it works well on this signature. It is especially funny for me, because a lot of my friends make jokes about how “fuzzy” my legs are, so yeah, it all works!

Twizzler0171
Simply Nutritious
I think it describes the signature, but doesn’t relate enough. It doesn’t convey the sense of happy, lightness. It more just describes the fruit. I think you could have used nutritious in a more fun way.

WIS
The Envy of Fruits
I see where you are trying to go with this, but the whole poetic thing doesn’t work for this signature. This signature needs a fun subtext, not something deep. Your subtext itself is quite nice, but it does not work on this signature.

Warnings to:
1. moogie
2. Pixa
3. WIS

[Susannahmio]

susannahmio
Robert - Fuzzy Outside - Sweet Inside
I love it when people relate the image to the person’s name. The way you related it, is different, though funny, and I think it works well on this signature. It is especially funny for me, because a lot of my friends make jokes about how “fuzzy” my legs are, so yeah, it all works!

When I saw the sig, I thought to myself..."what are Kiwis - They are furry and sweet" then it just hit me, maybe Robert is too......

[Robert]

The Judging was due yesterday, but since the round didn't count for anything really, I'll let it slide. Here is this weeks signature:



This one may be tough You have until Saturday April 29th to submit a subtext. 3 people will be eliminated.

[Anubis]

Fountains of Fire

Because of the colour... y'know? ... yeah. Probably going to change!

[Dragonfire]

The fury of nature... *fade* ...The serenity of water

Subtext changed.

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[pipsqueeek]

Boiling Tranquility

boiling because of the water looking almost like fire, and also because even though the whole scene has a sort of serenity about it, waterfalls are all frothy and hectic-ish and have a not calm aspect too.

If that made any sense whatsoever.

[May]

Sorry about the missing comments I totally misread and thought my comments were due today Apologies to everyone.

[Bangel]

The Judging was due yesterday, but since the round didn't count for anything really, I'll let it slide. Here is this weeks signature:



This one may be tough :) You have until Saturday April 29th to submit a subtext. 3 people will be eliminated.

Damnit, Robert, I'm really sorry. I'm not going to go into detail here, but if you need a plausible excuse, please check my LJ, and I assure you it won't happen again.

[Blk Mage]

Frozen in Time

Probably change and stuff.