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_jade_em_ - Dreaming within an azurite veil – 7/10

I like this. It’s a nice one to start with.
I like the fact you’ve not used the word purple and used azurite instead. But that’s not the only colour there. Nice job overall.

.:Requiem:. - Spellbinding Spectrum - 8/10

I really like this one. I like the way you’ve used alliteration and the words you use really suit the subtext. I especially like the use of ‘Spectrum’ as it makes me think of lots of different colours instead of just purple.

I’m only marking you down because of how much space there was and how little of it this would have used on it.

Anubis - Multicolour Glow - 5/10

It’s a little boring. Sure you didn’t use purple but your wording is kind of drab. I really like Bangel’s recommendation here. ‘Kaleidoscopic Brilliance’ would have been amazing.

But still. It’s a little small. Points off for that.

Blk Mage - Lost within the Rapture - 8/10

I like this. You’ve gone down a different route. This makes me think of dreaming and the signature is very dreamlike. I like the word Rapture and you’ve tried to use up a lot of the space. Good try. ^^

Fiddelysquat - From purple's deep and lucid depths
I've wandered far away
The journey wore me out until
I'd faded in to gray. - 6/10

Doesn’t anyone else think it’s a little… much? I’d have to be really bored to stop and wait to read it all.
I agree it’s very good but I think you tried a little too hard Fidds. I like it. But the first two lines would have sufficed. (Granted then I’d probably be whining that you’d used the colour purple but still… Shhh )

Forest_Majesty - Peerless Pixel Perfection - 9/10

I really like this. You’ve used up quite a big chunk of space and you’ve used alliteration. You’ve also stayed away from the evil purple. Great job.

Jen - See digital, See colours - 1/10

The first time I read it, it made me laugh. But I have no idea why… I think it was because of how blunt it is. I really don’t like it… it’s just stating what’s there…

Mjrinella - Mislaid in the vortex - 8/10

I really like your wording. It makes me think of being lost in the unknown. Nice Job.

PaperfacesX022 - Purple Majesty - 4/10

It’s kind of drab. I'd really have liked a bit more.
Your use of majesty… I'm not sure whether you meant that you thought the purple was regal or you meant regal as in splendour or magnificence. The latter would make more sense as I usually associate bolder colours as ‘regal’ colours. Also see my round notes.

Pattypus - Pixelated Purple - 5/10

I like the alliteration… and the fact you drew attention to the blocky-ness(For lack of a better word) of the set. If you look closer at the top there are kind of blocks there. Other than that check the Round notes.

Stephanie - Purple Haze - 2/10

Check my round notes and this is very similar to WIS’ and his was posted first. I understand you probably didn’t read his but you should read everyone’s. It’s never good when your subtext is similar to someone else’s.

Twinkle - A digital dream… - 6/10

It’s nice. I like your wording. I also like the way you trailed off but it probably wouldn’t look very good on the image. Plus the subtext’s a little small considering the room on the image. Marks off for that.

WIS - Digital Haze - 6/10

It’s good you didn’t mention purple but check my round notes.

Xil - Only we let the purple in - 1/10

Uhhh… What? I don’t get it. Is it supposed to be funny or something? This just confuses me… I don’t know what you’re getting at.

Eliminate:
1. Jens
2. Xil
3. Stephanie

Lol Dawn, I was actually the first one to submit a subtext. :3

Once again, Robert, you've bolded my name wrong.

It's like a trend to do this[/b]



Hmm

How about

A secluded path *fade* A distant laugh

I wanted to hint that there was something magical in the forest, without actually saying it boldly.

Jade: I'm a bit confused. If azure is a shade of blue, why would azurite be purple? Just my thinking.

az·ure ( P ) (zhr)
n.

A light purplish blue.

An Evergreen Escapade