This round is on icons...I think that's familiar territory for most of you, and it shows. :)
Scholastic: I had no idea there was a sunflower in there until I saw your photo. And I still can barely see the sunflower, just that it's in the upper corners. Anyway, your incorporation of pink is pretty neat, and the text is cool, but what's really bugging me is how overpowering all this is over your sunflowers. The icon kinda looks like a "garden" and I see the flower theme...just a messy one is all.
mazil: Oh wow, very awesome. The green makes it stand out so much, and the white border is a good choice. I really like how the hand is sticking out of the green and into the white. I'd move the entire green section over to the left by one pixel, but I guess it's just a matter of personal preference. I'm not sure how you used your second picture though...as those weird reflections in the background?
Jasujo: It's really bold, which is great, but kinda plain. I think you could've added something to the background to make it pop a little- maybe a lighter, larger heart, or some kinda flower to reflect the ones on the character? The border's also a tad iffy- I could only tell they were hearts when I leaned in waaay up close to my screen. The hearts on the bottom of the border are cut off, while all of them are pixelly too. Perhaps stick to something straight next time.
Koku: I think you went too yellow here. Your colour adjustments (perhaps the resizing too) have caused those raindrops to turn into small white splotches which makes the image look as though it was poor quality and unclean. The text is really hmm...plain and too minimal. I seem to see bits of a border, but it appears non-existant, which also affects the overall look.
Apricus: Looks pretty neat, but some things seem to be sticking out too much. For example, the waltzing people look really modern as compared to your rustic background. Raising the contrast of the background to something brighter could keep the theme but also complement the photo. You've done an excellent job of using the original photo's background and merging it with your own.
InsanePlushie: Hmm...some elements are too strong here. Especially the scanlines. The border also seems a tad constraining/restrictive, and the text choice is too plain. The colour adjustments on the picture do fit the icon, and the change also sets a good mood.
LAQ: Pretty neat background, the green works pretty well with the black- looks kinda chalkboard like. I think you darkened him a bit too much- it seems to be compromising image quality and contrast. The text is also somewhat unclear, although I understand the placement choice and all.
Neopets Addict: Hmm...this one comes off kinda messy, the way you used the image twice. Although it gives it an old feel, it makes it kinda bland too. Your text angles and placements have some creativity, but they're far too plain.
watericesage: There doesn't seem to be much done here, other than some brightness/contrast adjustments. The "with me" is barely visible too. Overall, I think you could have done far more with this.
_jaye_: Considering the terrible quality of the original image, you've done a pretty decent job with this. Augmenting each colour looks really nice there. The sparkles are a bit too strong at points though, and the text placement is kinda weird. The text doesn't really stand out, either.
rachel: Interesting stuff. However, I can barely tell how you used the original image. I also can't really tell what the image is- it seems like a bunch of Clouds and Difference Clouds filters, with colour added in. The effect is pretty bizarre though, and although I don't really like this icon as a matter of personal preference, I can see how things are working.
Neko: Pretty decent. Just a few things...to follow up on your "fade away" text, you should incorporate some fading in there. Layer masks to soften those lines on the right and the scanlines would have been nice. A darker border, too. The pixel squares and dots could be more brown than black, and less visible. Everything's there, I guess it just needs a little tweaking.
timkhj: Hehe, the idea's pretty cute. You didn't include a link or anything to the fruits background- was that a brush or an image? Anyway, as much as I don't like to mess around with photos, perhaps brightening things up and adding a slight green hue would've helped made things match.
Hmm, tough decision again! I guess this round I'll go for Koku, watericesage, and Neopets Addict.
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Yoshi on Wed Jul 13, 2005 1:12 am, edited 1 time in total.